You are going to move out of your apartment in an English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the apartment after you write a letter to your landlord in your letter.
Let your landlord know that you will be leaving.
Thank you landlord, for his or her help
Tell him or her about your friend.
Dear Smith
I am writing this letter to inform you about my colleague who showed her willingness to rent the apartment after I move to America for my career.
As I already told you that I got a teaching job at a High School in the United States of America. Hence, I am deciding to move to America on 28th March and leave my residing apartment rented out by you on midnight of 27th March.
I really appreciate the kind help provided by you while my stay at your flat. Furthermore, I cannot forget yours precious efforts to improve my French language and become fluent. So that I cannot feel any difficulty understanding people who speak French and do not know English.
To be honest, my friend Radhika who is 28-year-old is quite similar to me prefers to live in the same apartment where I am living now. She is very sincere to maintain cleanliness and deposit the rent timely. Moreover, she is a very quiet girl and does not cause any inconvenience to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... after I move to America for my career. As I already told you that I got a teachin...
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Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o speak French and do not know English. To be honest, my friend Radhika who is 2...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58378378378 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6203451894 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9767218827 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316230995525 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109958413101 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586258067 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138445302238 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419133494594 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.