Dear Sir,
I am coming to Quebec for three months to attend the crash course in Winston College on 15th of July, 2021.
I am going to study the Advanced Concepts of Oracle Database in the Winston College with other industry professionals. This is short term course which only allows working tech professionals to learn a great skillset in learning the concept of Oracle Database.
During my training, I am looking for an accommodation near the college which will be feasible for me to travel instead of using public transport service. I am coming from another India, and I do not have a knowledge about your town. Therefore, It is a humble request for you to look a spacious condo on rental basis for three months before I come to Quebec.
Apart from this, while arriving to the Airport, please let me know the convenient and fastest mode of transportation to commute to college as I want to fill in my registration details and short term training program officer will issue a card to enter in a college. After that, I could pay my visit to you to show me a rental place which you would have looked for me, and I can sign the lease agreement for three months.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Your sincerely,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2021'.
Suggestion: July 2021
...sh course in Winston College on 15th of July, 2021. I am going to study the Advanced C...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
... During my training, I am looking for an accommodation near the college which will be feasible...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64705882353 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59921570448 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6901876273 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209543730841 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849976848249 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421436187284 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924101488305 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244451942099 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.