You work for an international company and need to take some time off work to celebrate a family event. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- give details of the family event and why it is important you attend
- say how much time you will need away from the office
- suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I want a one-month vacation to go to my hometown as there are two prime reasons. The first reason is that I have not seen my mother for at least 1.5 years, and I wish to meet her and check the status of her living conditions. Another reason is that I have to attend a family event which is coming in the next three weeks.
It is my cousin's marriage, and my presence is utterly important because I have to take my mother and represent myself as a head member of the family after my late father. I hope you would understand the family responsibilities to take over if you are parents made you a head member of your family. This kind of responsibility involves multiple things in our culture, and one of those things is to attend family parties like marriage to perform rituals that require the participation of relatives in our Indian weddings.
I need at least a month's vacation because the celebration of Indian weddings takes at least 10 to 14 days and another reason is that I have to meet all my old friends who are living in India. We had already decided to spend a holiday at some exotic destinations which was planned a long time ago before getting married and it is a great chance for me to complete my travel bucket list on the next month's leave if you grant your approval from this letter.
You do not need to worry about the work as I will be available online from home during the first two weeks of the holiday to attend meetings through Skype with our clients as we have to complete the project. Plus, I have informed my teammates to complete the pending tasks left while I will be away from the office premises. My team will manage my work and I have aligned the experienced professionals to complete all the relative tasks. I hope you will grant me a one-month vacation, and I will be grateful for your kind approval.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be grateful for your kind approval. I am looking forward to hearing a positi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 32.9175257732 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 937.175257732 174% => OK
No of words: 364.0 206.0 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48901098901 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55391684379 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 127.690721649 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 290.88556701 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2380223703 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261172872322 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873741139871 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644612331355 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119907037789 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622547513596 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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