You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter,
explain your situation
describe the accommodation you require
say when you will need it
Dear Sir\Madam,
My name is Harpreet, and i am from India. I will be joining a short-term English learning course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Irelan, and i am extremely excited to join this course. I am writing this to request your help in finding accommodation for me.
The course will be starting from next month, 8th March till the end of April. Thus i would need a place to stay for this duration. As for the requirement, i would prefer a separate room with an attached washroom. However, i can share a kitchen and common area with other students. I am a good cook, so no problem on the food front. Furthermore, the room must be fully furnished, especially the almirah and the study table. The reason for this is that i do not intend to spend any money on buying furniture for such a short duration. I hope i am not demanding a lot, and you will be able to accommodate me to such a place.
Please write me back if any further details required from my end. I will be glad to provide so.
Yours faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... Sir\Madam, My name is Harpreet, and i am from India. I will be joining a shor...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ege in Greenmount, Northern Irelan, and i am extremely excited to join this cours...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...month, 8th March till the end of April. Thus i would need a place to stay for this d...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., 8th March till the end of April. Thus i would need a place to stay for this dur...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... this duration. As for the requirement, i would prefer a separate room with an at...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oom with an attached washroom. However, i can share a kitchen and common area wit...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tudy table. The reason for this is that i do not intend to spend any money on buy...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iture for such a short duration. I hope i am not demanding a lot, and you will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44210526316 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66797982442 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2309533793 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9230769231 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13521594906 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445617287723 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564088986589 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821234259633 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601155601648 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.