Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
People are spending less time on recreational activities these days. In my opinion, the reason why few people spare time for their hobbies is their hectic lifestyle and advancement of electronic devices, and this lifestyle has severe impacts on individuals' mental and physical health, and further, it affects society.
Firstly, contributing an enormous amount of time at the workplace in order to meet their ends has become quite common for the people in modern days. As a consequence, people hardly get any time to think about their hobbies. For instance, an individual spends nearly 9 to10 hours at the office, and by the time he reach home, they feel quite exhausting to spare time on any leisure activity. Secondly, with the advancement of electronic gadgets like mobile phones and computers, people are often glued to their screens either watching movies or playing games. Therefore, allocating some time for their hobbies has become a thing of the past.
To start with the impact of this altering lifestyle, undoubtedly, hobbies are the best way to unwind from hectic routines, release anxiety and stress, and when people keep some time aside for leisure such as playing the cricket, playing music or doing the painting. This way, they manage to ease their chaotic cycle. If an individual spent most of his time working or operating on the computer neglecting his hobbies, this way of living would make him mentally and physically sick. For instance, obesity and blood pressure concerns are quite common among young people nowadays. Furthermore, such people can be a threat to society, as they can get involved in antisocial and criminal activities.
In conclusion, a chaotic work schedule and modern electronic gadgets deterring people from spending time on their hobbies. While this way of living may deteriorate individuals' intellectual and physical condition, it would weaken the foundation of a healthy society by inculcating the criminal mindset and anti-community demeanour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...hours at the office, and by the time he reach home, they feel quite exhausting to spa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29874213836 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75084626539 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559748427673 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2874999752 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.357142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235575775516 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840779752506 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429955370458 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156876204403 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347946607539 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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