The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries, others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the population of aged people. While some believe that nations can have numerous issues due to this transition, however, i would agree with those who argue that this group plays an essential role in communities.
One concern in terms of elevated life expectancy is that the financial burden on the Government. This is because older people tend to require constant medical attention and fall sick frequently due to the obvious age factor. That said, it is the administration who takes care of all medical services, such as the construction of hospitals and old-age care centers. As a result, a large portion of public funds spends on such causes, which could have been used in other crucial advancements.
Turning to the importance of the old generation, they often act as the backbone of family and society as a whole. The reason for this that grownups have a life-long experience in the personal and social aspects, which makes them a perfect decision-maker and a great influencer. It can not be denied that they tend to impart rich cultural and ethical values to modern youngsters. For instance, In a modern hectic lifestyle, whereas parents are busy earning money, grandparents are the ones who always inculcate emotional and cultural values to their grandchildren, which is a crucial factor in forming a healthy society.
In conclusion, although increasing life-expectancy can cause financial loss to the Government, i feel that senior-citizens have immense contributions towards a solid nation as they often have a positive influence on the modern generation and teach ethical values and etiquettes to them.
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- More people live alone today than they did in the past Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give your opinion and relevant examples to support your view 73
- Nowadays many people want to buy famous brands of clothes cars and other items What are the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive or a negative development 67
- Nowadays many people work from home Some think it is beneficial while others think it may distract the family routine What is your opinion 67
- Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20664206642 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02113757253 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9731344812 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135125667387 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442169854339 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472160618071 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07707124835 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407766077335 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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