You are going to spend your vacation in a city in a foreign country. You have never been there before. Your cousin has a friend who lives there. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are making this trip
• Ask some questions about the city (e.g. places to see, things to do, things to bring)
Dear Nga,
I am writing to you from Ha Noi city, where we had a wonderful summer last year. Do you remember all the things my nephew, you and me did together during that vacation? I thought that was just yesterday.
As you know, i have never go abroad before so i always dream about going to a foreign country. I want to know the differences between my country and others. So, i decided to book a trip to Singapore, one of the most beautiful and modern nation over the world.
Futhermore, it is also the country you are living in. I think, with your experiences there, you could give me some advices in this trip.
I am making it only for four days, so i am not sure where is the best places i should visit or what is the best thing i should enjoy there. In addition, i heard that it is no need a visa to get in Singapore, but is there anything i should not bring like alcoho drinks, foods, cigarette or even the maximum amount of cash.
This is the first time i visit Singapore (also a foreign country), so could you please guide me some good things in this trip.
Thank you and best regards,
Your sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...yesterday. As you know, i have never go abroad before so i always dream about g...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nces between my country and others. So, i decided to book a trip to Singapore, on...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I am making it only for four days, so i am not sure where is the best places i ...
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... i am not sure where is the best places i should visit or what is the best thing ...
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... should visit or what is the best thing i should enjoy there. In addition, i hear...
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...hing i should enjoy there. In addition, i heard that it is no need a visa to get ...
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Suggestion: I
...get in Singapore, but is there anything i should not bring like alcoho drinks, fo...
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...ount of cash. This is the first time i visit Singapore also a foreign country,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28169014085 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29299350539 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2411998661 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308881547506 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107312384348 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866508884644 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149111470271 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674999902995 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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