You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter:
• explain what you need
• say when you plan to be there
• ask for information about prices
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr/Ms __________
Dear Ms nick,
I am Harry Martin,last week I booked a family trip to Singapore from you . I and my family are very excited for this trip so we have already booked the jungle safari tour, Disney land trip and a rental car as well. However, I am left with one major necessity that is the stay. I am writing this letter to enquire about a holiday stay that fits my requirements and budget.
First of all, we are looking for a stay near to downtown so that we could enjoy the night life and every other event without wasting much traveling time to hotel. my family includes five members, my elderly parents and my wife and an infant so we need two bedroom house with two bathrooms and a crib for the baby. A house with a kitchen would be preferred more.
WE will land there on 23rd dec and stay till 27th december, so it would be a 4 days stay. It would be really appreciated, if you provide me with the BEST options available with the price quote ranging between 100$-150$ per night stay.
Looking forward for the best deal from you as like you provided for the air tickets earlier.
Yours Sincerely,
Harry Martin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms nick, I am Harry Martin,last week I booked a f...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , last
Dear Ms nick, I am Harry Martin,last week I booked a family trip to Singapor...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oked a family trip to Singapore from you . I and my family are very excited for th...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e and every other event without wasting much traveling time to hotel. my family incl...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...t wasting much traveling time to hotel. my family includes five members, my elderl...
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Line 9, column 265, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...fe and an infant so we need two bedroom house with two bathrooms and a crib for the b...
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Line 17, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u provided for the air tickets earlier. Yours Sincerely, Harry Martin
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tickets earlier. Yours Sincerely, Harry Martin
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, so, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49038461538 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26857843427 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6683085076 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1634849727 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646470703247 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705173798518 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117640737166 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078539170856 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.