You are going to visit New Zealand for an ‘English and Homestay’ program.
You have just received details of your homestay host family.
Write your first letter to the family. In your letter
introduce yourself
ask the family some questions to get information that is
important to you
tell the family about your arrival date and time
Dear Mr. Mark Kennedy,
Greetings !!
I am really happy to get an opportunity to be a home-stay guest in your hometown. I am very thankful to you for this splendid chances to be your kind guest.
My name is Mohammed Aslam Noor Mohammed. I am an Indian and my hometown is Sivakasi, which is famously called as "Kutty Japan". I am 30 years old. My hobbies are listening sermons and attending social services. Do have I to bring computer with me or do you have the spare system in your home? Do you need any essential things to bring, which is not available spare in your home for my usage? Please inform one week before of my departure.
I will arrive Newzealand on 10th December, 2016 in the evening around 6 pm Newzealand GST time. My flight tickets are confirmed on the above schedule and the flight name is Cathey Pacific for your information.
I am expecting your arrival in Newzealand International Airport to welcome and pick me to your home as well.
Have a nice and good weekend. My sincere thanks and regards to you and your family.
Yours truly,
Mohammed Aslam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'December 2016'.
Suggestion: December 2016
...re. I will arrive Newzealand on 10th December, 2016 in the evening around 6 pm Newzealand G...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'really', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281818181818 0.220444632235 128% => OK
Verbs: 0.145454545455 0.167888034529 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0636363636364 0.0606518309736 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0363636363636 0.0506257000042 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.127272727273 0.118615021944 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0727272727273 0.107062808482 68% => OK
Participles: 0.0227272727273 0.041066498444 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67896967519 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409090909091 0.0385302599488 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0454545454545 0.0714148451538 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00454545454545 0.0191574576366 24% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00909090909091 0.00930345855455 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1093.0 1141.60824742 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.134020619 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63402061856 5.53046319177 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324742268041 0.284621296913 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226804123711 0.211203875043 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164948453608 0.133321485273 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113402061856 0.0843313296314 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67896967519 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 61.3809089935 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.125 16.4300151701 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0489184498 44.7399317507 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3125 90.9928171075 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.125 16.4300151701 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.613754768223 41% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 34.8054123711 37.5504026743 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.22058823529 1.13073093955 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361392566641 0.331212695627 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0854844489901 0.0927372745006 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.113572466579 0.0736520305886 154% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.588162289631 0.579516596996 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.254533237812 0.180689518051 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111478468558 0.122183219658 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100489133584 0.0765303033291 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.134299212809 0.211926503985 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0758423902496 0.0737400523855 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184571662132 0.203819188451 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929454368465 0.067151250289 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.0206185567 199% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.