You are going to visit the UK for an ‘English and Homestay’ program. Write a letter to the host family. In your letter:
– introduce yourself
– ask the family some questions to get essential information about the UK
– tell the family the scheduled date of arrival and time
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Wheeler family,
I hope this letter will find all of you in radiant health and best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you about my stay to attend an 'English and homestay program' in your country.
My name is Lavanya Kapoor and I am studying mass media and communication diploma at Delhi University. I will be your guest for ten days and I am keen to learn English from native speakers like you.
Well, this would be the first time I would visit any other country. Therefore, I would like to know the climate conditions in your country so that I can pack my luggage accordingly. Moreover, It would be great If you could spare a few minutes to suggest some informative websites that truly describe the culture of the UK.
At the same time, I am feeling excited to meet you all. My flight from India to the UK will land on 17th June at 6 in the evening. It would probably take me an hour to reach your place. It would be of great help If you could suggest some economical means of transportation from the airport.
See all of you soon!
Best wishes,
Lavanya Kapoor
- Fossil fuels (e.g. coals, oil and gas) are the main source of energy for most countries. However, alternative sources of energy (e.g. wind and solar) have been encouraged for use by some countries. To what extent is this a positive or negative development 73
- The number of older people is increasing. Some people think that this will cause problems in their countries, others believe this group is important to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 84
- Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers, others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
- Nowadays many mothers take care of the family and don t go out to work Some people believe they should be given salaries by the government To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4504950495 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42241133154 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9165376674 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191014755176 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705669615982 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742767617945 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959488315364 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697477566059 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.