You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Describe why you are having the party
Give directions on how to get to the venue
Suggest how you can accommodate him/her
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ___,
Dear Raj,
I hope you are doing well. I'm writing this to inform you about the party I have organised on 20th December for my birthday. It's my 30th birthday and I recently moved back to my home country India so, I'm inviting my nearest and dearest to enjoy this special occasion together.
I've organised the party at Lakeside Lawn which is located around 50 kilometers from my town because it is spacious and can accommodate the number of guests I have invited. You can arrive at the venue by catching a flight from Delhi to Mumbai, following which I can arrange a transportation for you from the airport till the venue. Do you remember Shashank? Even he's coming for the party.
Could you let me know the time of your arrival so that I can book an accommodation accordingly. I've already reserved the rooms in a Marriott hotel nearby the venue but, I need to give them a fixed count of guests and duration. I'd certainly love to have you at the party celebrating the day together.
I can't wait to hear from you
Your friend,
Mrinal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
Dear Raj, I hope you are doing well. Im writing thi...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ting this to inform you about the party I have organised on 20th December for my ...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...r my birthday. Its my 30th birthday and I recently moved back to my home country ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...nd can accommodate the number of guests I have invited. You can arrive at the ven...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...t from Delhi to Mumbai, following which I can arrange a transportation for you fr...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e know the time of your arrival so that I can book an accommodation accordingly. ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... a Marriott hotel nearby the venue but, I need to give them a fixed count of gues...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... party celebrating the day together. I cant wait to hear from you Your frie...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...arty celebrating the day together. I cant wait to hear from you Your friend, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5585106383 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54570600392 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643617021277 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0655064639 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336940345069 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124649984183 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813612778168 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176335715803 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458190995624 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.