Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about which progress is important to a country. Some enunciate the idea that economic growth is the ultimate goal of every government, I agree with the idea that other measures of progress, including happiness and environmental sustainability, are as crucial.
On the one hand, boosting economy is obviously a vital aim that all countries wish to achieve. Firstly, a healthy economy is the prerequisite for the government to enhance life quality, for they have money to upgrade public facilities and provide better public services. For instance, only when the economy creates enough profit and then contributes to state budget via tax can the medical service can be provided free of charge to all citizens, thus ensuring better health. Secondly, a strong economy also increases the status of a nation on the global stage. In other words, a prosperous country will have political influences on others, demonstrated by the power of America now.
On the other hand, I would argue that there are other equally significant factors that should be taken into consideration. The first measurement is well-being since richness does not always mean happiness and good health. A telling example is Japan, which is also one of giants in the global economy, but citizens often face stress because of excessive workload. The second consideration is the environmental protection because the growth of economy normally goes with the booming of manufacturing plants, the natural resources’ exploitation and the increasing production of waste. Without environmental conservation, severe contamination is inevitable, leading to health deterioration and other more serious consequences.
In conclusion, it is obviously true that the economic development is the key marker of a country’s success, but other criteria, which are well-being and environmental protection, are equally vital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: Economic
Economical growth is an essential factor for devel...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ng sumptuous amount of economy is every governments priority for nations and its people wel...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ablishments boosts the national economy.In contrast, development of infrastructure...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
...ates face environmental issue which are prove to be a barrier in their progression. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72727272727 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12020574586 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5735476901 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282469526369 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954605392181 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108309905654 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188575741438 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119706334719 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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