Dear Mr John
I hope you are doing well I am your next to neighbour and I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the friends between a gardens the fence is in the urgent need of repair cause your dogs are growing unfriendly and hostile in nature.
To begin with, the fence is causing problem because your dogs often surpass the periphery of houses and barks at passers-by . Yesterday, my children were playing in the backyard and got frightened with the sudden arrival of your dogs. Thanks to the fence, they could manage to get back home else they could have injured. In the light of above incident , a strong fence should be installed so your pets could not jump to my site. Moreover, they destroy my plants and ruin all the embellishments of my garden so I think a new fence will be a panacea to all these problems.
Lastly , it would b great to split the fence and the installation cost , as both families will enjoy the benefits. However, the iron fence would be expensive but it would pinch less if we share the cost. I will be waiting for your response.
Youra truly,
Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a garden' or simply 'gardens'?
Suggestion: a garden; gardens
...w your attention to the friends between a gardens the fence is in the urgent need of repa...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...iphery of houses and barks at passers-by . Yesterday, my children were playing in ...
^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... injured. In the light of above incident , a strong fence should be installed so y...
^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...panacea to all these problems. Lastly , it would b great to split the fence and...
^^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...plit the fence and the installation cost , as both families will enjoy the benefit...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... I will be waiting for your response. Youra truly, Smith.
^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ting for your response. Youra truly, Smith.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37978963205 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3156586852 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31342252025 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988280166195 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089722674353 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206139797448 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100054244305 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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