Dear Mr John ,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the problem I have encountered last week.
To kick off I chose this job of tutor in your company 'Bright' to meet my daily expenses. Moreover, I was in need of part time job to pursue my for the studies .Although my experience has been quite good since I joined but from the last week, I felt some of my colleagues have become hostile and non cooperative. More than that , they are keeping an eye on me while I work. Due to this peculiar behaviour, I am finding it difficult to continue this job as my patience has pushed to the limit.
Lastly , I would like to beseech you to address this problem and take immediate action over it . you can either shift me to the other branch if possible. Besides , please summon a meeting to make the environment friendly. Thank you for your consideration.
yours truly,
ayari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Mr John , I am writing to draw your attention ...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ly expenses. Moreover, I was in need of part time job to pursue my for the studies .Altho...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rt time job to pursue my for the studies .Although my experience has been quite go...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... time job to pursue my for the studies .Although my experience has been quite good since...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ile and non cooperative. More than that , they are keeping an eye on me while I w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...atience has pushed to the limit. Lastly , I would like to beseech you to address ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...roblem and take immediate action over it . you can either shift me to the other br...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...lem and take immediate action over it . you can either shift me to the other branch...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to the other branch if possible. Besides , please summon a meeting to make the env...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ly. Thank you for your consideration. yours truly, ayari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, lastly, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51572327044 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56613881379 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8624173241 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196563795952 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715709873119 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591815736637 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125341075787 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587969467781 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.