You are an international student and have borrowed a book from the local public library.
You left the book on a bus and when you contacted the bus company, they could not find it.
Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation and asking what you should do.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir,
Last week, I borrowed a Political Science book from your library as I am preparing for UPSC exams. It was extremely useful so I always carry it with me. Yesterday, I got a call from my friend and we planned to study together, I found the book worth it, hence, I thought to carry it with me.
While going to her home, I took a bus and unfortunately, fell asleep. When I wake up I realized that I have missed the bus stop and immediately rushed to the driver to ask him to stop the bus on the next stop but uncertainly, forgot to pick the book. When I rang the bus company the next day, they could not find it and suggested that somebody must have picked it up.
Could you please let me know what I have to do now? Being an international student I do not have enough money, but of course, I will pay for a new copy of the book of it is necessary.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Science) must be used with a third-person verb: 'books'.
Suggestion: books
...st week, I borrowed a Political Science book from your library as I am preparing for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14367816092 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44579902775 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9142753026 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1111111111 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309148886281 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958423480705 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703353985005 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172662830936 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591652451185 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.