You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:introduce yourselfexplain what sort of job you would likesay what experience and skills you haveBegin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/MadamYou should write at lea

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You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:

introduce yourself

explain what sort of job you would like

say what experience and skills you have

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam

You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Pooja Dhingra. I have done my post graduation is Computer Applications. I am looking for a full time job in IT industry. I cam to know about your agency from a friend. I am writing to you to define my qualification, experience and working requirements.

I am working in an MNC. I am looking for a change as i am working in the same company from last 7 years. I want to make best use of my skills and it will be good if i will get the chance to lead a team. I would like to continue in the same technology as i am very much proficient in it and it is the current trend of the IT and resources are very rarely available for this field. I can give training to the new resources. I have started in my current company as a trainee but now i am senior software engineer. My recent ongoing project is in SharePoint technology. I am good learner and flexible with the new technology and timings. I was awarded as the employee of the month in the year 2017.

Looking forward for the positive response from your end. I have attached my resume with the letter. Please fell free to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

Pooja Dhingra

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st graduation is Computer Applications. I am looking for a full time job in IT in...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...mputer Applications. I am looking for a full time job in IT industry. I cam to know about...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing for a full time job in IT industry. I cam to know about your agency from a fr...
^
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o know about your agency from a friend. I am writing to you to define my qualific...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erience and working requirements. I am working in an MNC. I am looking for ...
^
Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...irements. I am working in an MNC. I am looking for a change as i am working...
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Line 9, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in an MNC. I am looking for a change as i am working in the same company from las...
^
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in the same company from last 7 years. I want to make best use of my skills and ...
^
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...me company from last 7 years. I want to make best use of my skills and it will be good if...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...use of my skills and it will be good if i will get the chance to lead a team. I w...
^
Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f i will get the chance to lead a team. I would like to continue in the same tech...
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to continue in the same technology as i am very much proficient in it and it is...
^
Line 9, column 318, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...nt in it and it is the current trend of the IT and resources are very rarely available...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 381, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e very rarely available for this field. I can give training to the new resources....
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Line 9, column 423, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...can give training to the new resources. I have started in my current company as a...
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Line 9, column 481, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my current company as a trainee but now i am senior software engineer. My recent ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34101382488 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71776904009 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1789499149 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.3333333333 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0555555556 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.944444444444 4.34317383033 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154321997493 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482064164228 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05699160012 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112450899492 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587514011633 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.