you are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:introduce yourselfexplain what sort of job you would likesay what experience and skills you haveWrite at least 150 words.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear sir,
I am Harry singh, yesterday I read advertisement of your employment agency that mentions about a job openings in various fields. I am writing this letter to apply for the job code ST-101.
I found myself as an aspirant candidate for this job, as I have nearly ten years of experience as a technical test lead in a renowned multi-national IT organisation. Coming to my skills, I have done Masters in computer science from Rhode Island University, after that i got a campus placement to Infosys private organisation. As a part of training I also cleared a 'sun certified' software testing course. I left my last job because we moved to a different location due to my husband's new project.
I would like to apply for the jobs related to my profile which is a testing engineer. I have a domain knowledge of banking projects that is another add-on to my accomplishments. I am a good team leader and an enthusiastic person , I also have the ability to handle challenging situations in a positive way. I have enclosed my curriculum vitae with this letter, please have a look on it.
I hope you would like my profile and find it suitable for this job code. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Harry singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am Harry singh, yesterday I read adver...
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etter to apply for the job code ST-101. I found myself as an aspirant candidate ...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rom Rhode Island University, after that i got a campus placement to Infosys priva...
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Line 4, column 327, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cement to Infosys private organisation. As a part of training I also cleared a sun...
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Line 6, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my profile which is a testing engineer. I have a domain knowledge of banking proj...
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Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s another add-on to my accomplishments. I am a good team leader and an enthusiast...
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Line 6, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d team leader and an enthusiastic person , I also have the ability to handle chall...
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Line 6, column 289, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...bility to handle challenging situations in a positive way. I have enclosed my curriculum vitae wi...
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Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...allenging situations in a positive way. I have enclosed my curriculum vitae with ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...is letter, please have a look on it. I hope you would like my profile and find...
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Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...able for this job code. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Har...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hear from you soon. Yours sincerely Harry singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69724770642 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93265884419 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3465555769 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7692307692 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191432868469 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708856260822 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652664472556 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134281677497 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075634759863 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.