You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skills you have
Dear sir,
I am a candidate looking for a job. I am writing this to register myself in your company for helping me getting a full-time job.
Recently I have completed my graduation in Bachelor in Interior Designing. I have completed my 6 months apprenticeship with the renowned architect of my city Mr.Abhishek Bhansali. I looking forward to having a full-time job in the same field. I can work with any kind of projects either it is residential, commercial or industrial. I have also worked in many Government as well as Non-Government projects.
I am particularly proud of my creative skills. My previous work record proves that I am good at convincing and explaining - which I believe a major employer shall be looking for.
I look forward to your kind assistance.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully
Mike Ross
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...r myself in your company for helping me getting a full-time job. Recently I have c...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Abhishek
...th the renowned architect of my city Mr.Abhishek Bhansali. I looking forward to having a...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...hitect of my city Mr.Abhishek Bhansali. I looking forward to having a full-time j...
^
Line 9, column 333, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... residential, commercial or industrial. I have also worked in many Government as ...
^
Line 9, column 355, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Government seems to be countable; consider using: 'many Governments'.
Suggestion: many Governments
...al or industrial. I have also worked in many Government as well as Non-Government projects. ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... well as Non-Government projects. I am particularly proud of my creative sk...
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Line 21, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your kind assistance. Thanking you, Yours faithfully Mike Ross
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Line 25, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you, Yours faithfully Mike Ross
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 137.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15328467153 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19552071766 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686131386861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.00290771 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1818181818 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4545454545 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218465717661 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846076914199 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755931364106 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11351577223 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665693382772 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.