You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency.
In your letter:
- introduce yourself
- explain what sort of job you would like
- say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my interest for applying for a part-time job available in accounting department.
I Prabhpreet Kaur have done my Bachelor in Commerce from Shri Ram College in 2017. Moreover, I have one year of work experience as an assistant manager in customer services in IDFC Mutual Funds. Additionally, I have done a short-term course on Banking and Finance. Currently, I am pursuing my Masters in Commerce from Amity University and also have cleared level one of Certified Public Accountant.
I am seeking a part time job in Banking Sector as it will enable me to get practical experience in accountancy department which will aid me in building a successful future career. Furthermore, please ensure that not only a handsome salary is offered but also the location of the office is not very far from my home as a lot of travelling will hamper my time for studying.
I posses the expertness in excellent customer handling and problem solving. Moreover, I am very punctual and have good inter-personal, communication and time management skills.
I hope you will be able to find the job that best suits my profile. I am attaching my resume for your reference.
I look forward to hearing from your soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ied Public Accountant. I am seeking a part time job in Banking Sector as it will enable...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...taching my resume for your reference. I look forward to hearing from your soon....
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00465116279 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01072178162 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1992904267 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7692307692 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190280526107 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626272086141 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506801278974 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100282948072 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584572448516 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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