DEAR SIR OR MADAM,
I am writing to you for seeking information about a part time job. Allow me to elaborate.
I have recently landed in Los Angeles and attending school at UC, Berkley. I landed on a Student permit with allowance of 40 hours work a week. In addition, my father passed away 2 months ago and my mother is single bread earner in family. However, my mother has not jeopardized with my plans to study abroad and has sponsored me. As such, I do not want to cast any burden upon her and as such I am looking for a job.
I am looking for a part-time job with an option to work evening shifts after 6:00 PM as on Wednesday is a busy day at University. I am open to jobs at restaurant, bars and cafes etc.
Furthermore, I am a fun loving and an outgoing person with good communication skills. I don’t have much of work experience but I am willing to work hard to make up for it.
I hope to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... to you for seeking information about a part time job. Allow me to elaborate. I have r...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... jobs at restaurant, bars and cafes etc. Furthermore, I am a fun loving and an ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29508196721 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61177034251 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5321636598 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4615384615 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185610103732 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622508607711 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623546433578 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115242367377 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580880625967 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.