Dear Sir/Madam,
I feel the need to write to you to appreciate an employee of your hotel who had gone the extra mile to help me out during my stay in the hotel. Not only did he win a customer for you, but also won a company’s business. Allow me to elaborate.
To begin with, I was staying at your hotel on the weekend and had locked myself in the hotel room. Nobody was near my room as the floor was undergoing renovation. However, since I was the only one on that floor an employee namely Mr. Jacob would always come and check out on me.
Secondly, on the day of the incident, I had rushed to my room to look out for some documents. As a result, the key was left outside. The door abruptly closed and I was locked inside. Subsequently, the said employee reached my room and saved me.
Afterwards, I tried to tip the gentleman, but he did not accept anything from me. Therefore, I am sending you a small token of appreciation which should be handed over from my side to him. I salute his honesty and commitment to customer service.
I am looking forward to staying at your hotel again.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I feel the need to write to you to appre...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your hotel again. Yours faithfully, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43333333333 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57541578001 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8654274879 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134755535728 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407249092787 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459756008667 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771590822332 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362392376092 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.