In the past, there were not many jobs and people had to depend on their own for livelihood. However, with the development today, everything has been changing as there is a boom in the figures of people employed at different places. This had led to people question the appropriate age of retirement, some assert that there should be a fixed age and others say it should be dependent on the occupation. However, the essay will deal with the view of having a fixed retirement age.
On the first place, every society is guided by a set of norms and is special on its own. It is not possible to amend them from perspective of range of people. Every law is made by keeping in mind the condition of the society and further, the will of the people. For instance, Most of the white collar jobs across the world have a retirement age of 65. As after a specific time it is not possible for brain to process information. Thus, the policies are made keeping in mind the scientific reasons.
On the second place, receiving financial grant from a government is a privilege that not everyone receives. Only certain forms of jobs are vested with the financial benefits even after superannuation. There are many workers engaged in the unorganized sectors which are not accounted. For example, a laborer will not receive anything from the government at any point in his life. Therefore, the concept of retirement and having a fund from government is only applicable for certain people.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the need of the hour is to bring a uniform policy to help all the old age people irrespective of the level of job one was involved with. The move will cater to the needs of the people in need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70056497175 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65276347881 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514124293785 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7607281073 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2380952381 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473020586349 0.244688304435 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123280633847 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182639086797 0.0667982634062 273% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250087306814 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243070769193 0.056905535591 427% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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