You are looking for a part-time job.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
and say what experience and skills you have
Dear Matthew,
I am writing to you to apply for a part-time occupation in Ottawa through your Employment Agency. I am a student pursuing my post-graduation course in TomFord University-Ottawa. Its the 1st semester of my course and I would like to begin with job soon so that I can meet all my expenditure as well as can grow my professional skills.
To begin with, I would like to work as a part-time Business Development Executive. To add more, I am really passionate with this job/field and love to grab leads, meet new people and so on. It’s excruciatingly wonderful occupation and accelerates me to get into it deeper and deeper everytime.
Moreover, I had worked for the same field during my bachelor's studies as a freelancer. I am flexible with teamwork, proficient in managing clients and their requirements with superior communication skills, good at lead generation, excellent at analysing the Project Scope and preparing documentation for the same. Furthermore, If I would be given an opportunity I can prove my skills and can delve into this more so that you can have a better idea regarding my expertise.
Attaching my Resume for the reference and you can let me know if you need more specific details.
Waiting for your response,
Thanks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...on course in TomFord University-Ottawa. Its the 1st semester of my course and I wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22060252626 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5401526681 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183048838704 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724924337162 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705642828925 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111281883237 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344789487819 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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