You are a member of {HI organisation which meets regularly at a
particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not
satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the qualihJ of the
food and the behaviour of the staff·
Write a letter to the mallager of tlte restaurant. Explain what was
wrong with the meal and tire service, and suggest what he/she should
do to ensure that you and your group reh'm to the restaurant.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to share my genuine feedback of your restaurant by considering my recent visiting experience with colleagues. Though, we are regular customer of your restaurant but I was badly disappointed by the service of your restaurant I had with my colleagues.
We have visited your restaurant last week for a business conference. We have ordered few starters and beverages - milk shake, coffee, juice during the conference. First of all, I would like to mention that service was too slow and when we were about to close, then they brought our order that we have mentioned beforehand. Moreover, when we asked the restaurant staff to bring some ice for juices and shakes they asked for extra charges for that which sounds very odd.
Another point, I want to make is for food quality. As we had main course and desserts too, I found that fruits were mushy, stale vegetables were served and salad was stinking. Apart from that, milk used to make milk shakes seemed to be rancid.
When we pointed out all these to restaurant staff, instead of making situation better, they were rude to us. Nobody had enjoyed meal and our day was fully spoiled.
Finally, I would like to suggest you that you should have weekly audit of the kitchen of your restaurant and monthly training should be provided to restaurant staff for kind behavior with customers. In this way, standard and name of your restaurant will be appreciated by customers.
I hope my suggestion has been of use to you and will be really glad If you can provide us some free meal coupons or discounted visit for the near future to compensate this one.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ering my recent visiting experience with colleagues. Though, we are regular custo...
^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...s seemed to be rancid. When we pointed out all these to restaurant staff, instead ...
^^^
Line 10, column 66, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'audited'.
Suggestion: audited
...suggest you that you should have weekly audit of the kitchen of your restaurant and m...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... one. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ell
^^
Line 17, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing from you. Yours faithfully, Ell
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, apart from, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84013605442 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56050932164 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.75 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178391530815 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567571752664 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525642968609 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975243017555 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328918224667 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.