You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant.
The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Navdeep Puri, dweller of Huston Street New York U.S.A, penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint regarding the pathetic service which I and my colleagues experienced last Friday. As you know , our company organises a monthly review meeting at your restaurant, thus we usually visit your place for meetings. Sadly, this time we realized that the quality of your eatables are degrading day by day.
When we arrived at your restaurant, the place was totally messed up and air conditions were also not working well. Although the aroma of food was pleasant, the taste was horrible as it seemed that the inferior quality ingredients were used in while food.
Even though I immediately approached to your supervisor to rectify above mistakes, all in vain. Therefore, it would be highly appreciable if you change your cook and staff supervisor in order to tackle with above cited hassles. If you really aspire that we would visit you again , kindly take some stringent action to curb this nuisance.
I am anticipating a prompt and effective action from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Navdeep Puri
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...side. Yours faithfully, Navdeep Puri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63339026126 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716577540107 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8550978627 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16033043767 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593895436453 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462817569157 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821702187622 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384834934871 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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