Dear William,
I am Thomson your new tenant. I recently joined in your house located in East end corner of the City along with my family. However within few days we noticed that existing furniture in the house are quiet old fashioned and damaged. In fact i made it clear in our rental agreement that house should be ready with modern and branded furniture even before we join the house. To my surprise i found the existing wooden tables, cots, chairs and racks are infested with termites and quiet ineligible for domestic purpose.
I hope this is just a mistake and you will rectify this with immediate notice of the problem. I suggest you to visit the house premises and take estimation of costs for arranging new furniture and other repairs. It would be better if you take help from an expert before proceeding further. I would also like to bring your notice about remedial clause in our agreement where it is made clear that if you fail to give proper and necessary response to this letter I can sue you for damages and charges for arranging another accommodation of my choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...orner of the City along with my family. However within few days we noticed that existin...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...efore we join the house. To my surprise i found the existing wooden tables, cots,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66145833333 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38183751683 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6858355378 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17996026261 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691419860561 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399079228509 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136810480339 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407080337696 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.