you are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the quality of the food and the behaviour of the staff.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
Explain what was wrong with the meal and the services, and suggest what he/she should do to ensure that your group return to the restaurant.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the meal and the services of your restaurant. I and my group members often come to your restaurant for a group discussion about our work as we are working on a project together and after that, we eat dinner here.
Let me explain to you about the food and services of your restaurant last night. Firstly, when we arrive and order starters, it takes 30 minutes to your staff to get these and the cutlery is not enough for 7 of us and full of dirt. After calling the waiter, plates and spoons were replaced. Meanwhile, the main meal was served but the rice is too cold and does not look like fresh at all. Also, the meat was not tender and have a stinky smell.
I recommend you to train your staff and check on the duties of your staff so that, the customer will not get disappointed. I would like to suggest to your chefs to properly cook the meal and it should be warm before serving the customer. We will hope that you will fix these problems otherwise, we will not come to your restaurant in the future.
Hope you will consider these suggestions.
Yours faithfully,
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-11-05 | rezapradika | 73 | view |
- On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manger of your insurance company In your letter Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insuran 73
- Some people think that going to libraries nowadays is not necessary as everyone has internet while other people believe that libraries can t be replaced by the internet Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problem as well as benefits Do you think that bring a celebrity brings more benefits or more problem 84
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers They are used in business hospitals crime detection and even to fly planes In which more fields will they be used in the future Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more cautious 61
- A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet gets a lot of excercise and avoid stress What do people do to stay healthy in your country 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43540669856 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32819249641 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3519480071 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2727272727 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155711413358 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598241913192 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428255975053 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103709782716 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218819892356 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.