Dear Sir or Madam,
On behalf of the group, I would like to express my dissatisfaction in regard to the recent meal that we had during our regular organisation meeting.
It has come to my attention that we had a very horrible dinner experience last night. Firstly, I would like to make comment about the food which turned out to be blend. On top of that, the meat was not cooked up to the standard, even some of them were still raw. Likewise, the service was really awful. In detail, the waitress did not show a friendly sign at all.
I would highly recommend that the food quality is maintain at a high standard and always make sure the cooks double check every meal before sending it out to diners. Consequently, waitress is to be trained to have a proper customer service proficiency. We would really appreciate if you could fix this problem immediately as to provide better experience in the future.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Reza Pradika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...ghly recommend that the food quality is maintain at a high standard and always make sure...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, likewise, really, so, still, as to, even so, in regard to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71334946374 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690058479532 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6345526624 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 4.34317383033 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183933317619 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560318601262 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379457250662 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1125822988 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116667971324 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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