You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention toward the bad quality of food and the hospitality in your restaurant. We are your old customers and we know about the ins-out of the place. Maximum time our organization plan a meet in your place and the sole reason was hospitality and the food served by the staff
In our last meet on Saturday, we ordered lunch there which included ,"a mix veg", "Dal makhani" and "chapati".We understand that due to weekend it was fully packed but the quality of food should not be compromised on this, as you are among the best one . Firstly the waiter took half an hour for the delivery of food and moreover the food was stale and cold, chapatis was not fully cooked and several were burnt. Dal was half-cooked and full of spices,all were are aged and thus does not have a single spoon of it. Disappointingly This was not only the case ,further when we asked for the bill they have included such extra amount of item which we did not ordered. Strangely but this was never expected from your staff.
In regard to the reputation of your place I would highly recommend you to look into this matter promptly before you loose your customer and stature.You can boost your chef bu giving them tip for the best complemented dish and by mentioning star of the day .
It would be great if you take my consideration into account. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y, we ordered lunch there which included ,'a mix veg', 'Dal makhani...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...l makhani' and 'chapati'.We understand that due to weekend it was f...
^^
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d on this, as you are among the best one . Firstly the waiter took half an hour fo...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
.... Dal was half-cooked and full of spices,all were are aged and thus does not have a ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
... was half-cooked and full of spices,all were are aged and thus does not have a singl...
^^^^
Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve a single spoon of it. Disappointingly This was not only the case ,further when...
^^
Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...appointingly This was not only the case ,further when we asked for the bill they ...
^^
Line 5, column 688, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'order'
Suggestion: order
...h extra amount of item which we did not ordered. Strangely but this was never expected ...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ok into this matter promptly before you loose your customer and stature.You can boost...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...ore you loose your customer and stature.You can boost your chef bu giving them tip ...
^^^
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d dish and by mentioning star of the day . It would be great if you take my co...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ideration into account. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, thus, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68871595331 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7379554187 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.937091938 44.8134815571 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.5 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19139868015 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736839516348 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433060159637 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123163704175 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250856926622 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.