You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a paricular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory, and you were very disapoonted with the quality of the food and the behaviour of the staff.Write a letter to the m

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You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a paricular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory, and you were very disapoonted with the quality of the food and the behaviour of the staff.

Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. Explain what was wrong with the meal and the service, and suggest what he/she should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

Dear Sir / Madam,

I, on behalf of the Ex-students Association of Dhaka University, would like to state that, on every Friday we the members of the association sit together in your restaurant to get together and pass our leisure time during the holiday. Unfortunately, we had a terrible experience last time.

One of our fellow memmbers was a vegetarian. So, we asked the waiter to serve the soup with no chicken. But, whenever we were to try the soup, plenty of chicken meat was discovered. Moreover, your waiter and your manager made fun of being vegetarian when we asked to replace the item. It was very disrespectful for someone's way of life.

I hereby hope that your enterprise will respect every customer's personal matter, as well as their opinion. I also request you to convey an official confession. Otherwise, our association will choose a new destination.

Faithfully Yours,
ABC

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05369127517 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92517805726 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724832214765 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1268631264 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4545454545 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5454545455 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901202511092 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361271521306 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437640758824 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550078239288 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195234250022 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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