You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restaurant the most recent meal you had that was not satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the quality of food and behavior of staff.
Write a letter to a manager of the restaurant. Explain what was wrong with the meal and service and suggest what he/she should do to ensure that you and your group returned to the restaurant.
Begin your letter as follows,
Dear Sir/Madam
Dear sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food and the services of your restaurant. As you are aware about our society association meeting held quarterly at you restaurant.
Recently our society members were met at your restaurant we had ordered the Indian Cuisine meal. We the meal arrived at our table surprisingly we noticed that the curry was not fresh and it was getting bad smell. In addition to this the quality of bread was not good in fact the bread was too much hard. I called to waiter and informed him for the bad quality of food which they had served. I requested him for change dishes of curry and breads but he refused me to change the dishes. I felt very bad for rude behavior of your staff.
Hence, I request you to look in to this matter seriously and resolve the matter as earliest as possible. I look forward to hear from you.
Thanks
Yours faithfully
Nisharg
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...od and the services of your restaurant. As you are aware about our society associa...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...but he refused me to change the dishes. I felt very bad for rude behavior of your...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...as earliest as possible. I look forward to hear from you. Thanks Yours faithfully...
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook forward to hear from you. Thanks Yours faithfully Nisharg
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, so, as to, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65243902439 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52909159248 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0869370537 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3636363636 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28320441563 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927870741941 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646332669421 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169356414927 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345169022221 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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