Dear sir or madam,
I feel the need to bring to your knowledge about the unsatisfactory quality of the food and the horrendous behaviour of the restaurant employees. Allow me to elaborate.
I have been a regular patron at your restaurant along with other members of XTV-O Organization and dine in every Saturday. However, on 23 June 2018, when as usual we were dining in I came across a dead mosquito in my soup bowl which was being shared by other visitors. As such, I called the duty manager and showed him the soup. To our utter dismay, the manager did not seem concerned at all and did not accede to my request to change the soup.
Further, I had asked the duty manager to give me the contact details of manager to make him aware of the situation to which he responded back in a very aggressive manner and created a very weird atmosphere for my visitors. As such, we decided to abruptly end the meal and leave the restaurant without any further ado.
Furthermore, we do not want to break the long relationship that we have enjoyed with you and as such, I call upon you to fire the employees who were at fault immediately and intimate us accordingly.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I feel the need to bring to your knowled...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, however, may, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58604651163 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65513370509 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5448681151 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175971978039 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560446256454 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369296144238 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855364938605 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395228711566 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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