Dear Manager,
The objective of writing this letter is to let you know that I am unhappy with changing area of a sports complex which I visit.
First of all, I would like you to address the main problem which I faced every day, is with a door lock which never works. So there is the probability of people can enter a room without knowing that someone is already there inside. Apart from this, there is no hanger to put my clothes on. Even more, I cannot keep my sportswear on the floor because it is not clean.
I am exceedingly displeased with both management and caretaker. Even though I have complained about the issue which I have stated above to the caretaker but there was no solution to it.
Foremost, I would like you to install a new door lock for all rooms as quickly as possible along with that it will be nice of you if you advise sweepers to clean the floor twice a day for better hygiene for all of us.
I hope you will address these concerns as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Vimal B
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, apart from, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39473684211 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3467369932 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.497714236 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275655417121 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833947896144 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826627567517 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147376782109 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660218238033 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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