In recent years, many have begun to believe that, online shopping is increased compared to the past and one day it might happen that shops will be closed. Although Many may readily disagree with this, I firmly agree with such an opinion. My Position is argued further.
out of all the reasons, the foremost one is that this is technological era and everything is available online starting from the small pin to huge furniture. In addition to that company is delivering the product by no cost to the doorsteps which attracts the people most, the reason behind that is, everyone is busy in their own lives and don't have time to go outside to purchase the essential things henceforth Online Stores are beneficial for them like they found water in the desert.
Furthermore, virtual shopping provides so many facilities and discounts to influence their customers. Such as delivery within 24 hours or instant cashback offers. Hence people undoubtedly choose this option to save their money as well as their time. for instance, A man who wants to send a gift to her mother who is in hometown Can choose a present from Amazon, and with the help of prime membership, it will deliver the next day with 20% cashback due to the Christmas offer.
On the contrary, some people counter-argue and claim in favor of shops will not close due to they want to check the product first and then to purchase it, along with some of the population in each and every city Who are uneducated and do not know how to do online shopping hence markets will remain open for them.
Thus, to conclude the discussion. It can be commented that though the stores are indeed helpful for uneducated people, however, the facilities available and discounts influence more so there are chances for shutting down the market in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...pen that shops will be closed. Although Many may readily disagree with this, I firmly ag...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Out
...nion. My Position is argued further. out of all the reasons, the foremost one is...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...everyone is busy in their own lives and dont have time to go outside to purchase the...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...in 24 hours or instant cashback offers. Hence people undoubtedly choose this option t...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...save their money as well as their time. for instance, A man who wants to send a gif...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rst and then to purchase it, along with some of the population in each and every city Who a...
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Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...re chances for shutting down the market in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80064308682 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51070844785 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7053393287 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231266730148 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065814559886 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862639888154 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118046537043 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950489551666 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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