You are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports centre that you visit. Write a letter to the manager.
- What the problem is
- How you feel about the problem
- What steps you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am a live member of your sports center. I am writing this letter to express the problems all the members are encountering in the changing rooms.
The bolts on the doors and windows are broken, thus anyone can enter the room while we are changing. Aling with this, the curtains are very dirty and smell odor. The washroom attached within the changing room stink. The garbage bins are very dirty and overfilled with waste for the long time. The cooling system in the changing room is also not working properly.
On behalf of all the members, I request you to please look into this matter urgently. We all feel very unpleasent for the services we are reserving. We all haver paid a heavy membership fees adn hope to receive the best.
In my suggestion, I would like to request you to call a pumper and a carpenter to soon get the changes done. Also, urge to arrange regular inspection of the changing room by the staff incharge for the cleaning services work properly.
Hope to receive positive results from you regarding this matter.
Your sincerely,
Daljit Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...verfilled with waste for the long time. The cooling system in the changing room is ...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arranging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'urge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: arranging
...o soon get the changes done. Also, urge to arrange regular inspection of the changing room...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... matter. Your sincerely, Daljit Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74736842105 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38274033909 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1331149957 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4285714286 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183448809533 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561621518998 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448811350286 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988560530092 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218592230895 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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