You are planning a holiday in another country and would like a friend to accompany you.
Write a letter to the friend asking him/her to join you and explain:
- Why are you taking a holiday?
- What is your holiday plan?
- Why would you like him/her to go with you?
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you and your family are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to invite you to accompany me for one-week holiday trip with me.
For the past one-year I was occupied with a lot of work pressure in my company IDFC Mutual Funds as they have launched a New Fund Offer for its investors. The entire responsibility from the launch of the new scheme, receiving the applications, depositing the high value cheques and sending the report to our back office was on me. Since now the work pressure has reduced a bit, I am thinking to take one-week holiday.
I am planning to organise a trip to Singapore for a week from 12th December to 19th December. It is a beautiful island which is not only famous for being the cleanest country in the world but also has many famous tourist attractions such as Universal Studios, Singapore Flyer and Gardens by the Bay. We will have a great fun there enjoying the exotic seafood, shopping, as well as spending a day on Singapore cruise.
I would like you to accompany me on this holiday as I am sure we will enjoy there doing many exciting activities together. Kindly schedule all your work so that you can take out your time and plan with me for this holiday trip.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Take care
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Take care With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5601659751 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46098322266 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8942940166 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5384615385 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251923170195 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099226444915 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897523194668 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16529066926 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12606035026 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.