You are relocating to a new city. Write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
In your letter, you should tell:
– when you will relocate
– why you are relocating
– what kind of house you want.
As a matter of fact, I am working as a production engineer at a steel factory in Jeddah; Our Company will open a new factor in Dammam. I have been chosen to be a production manager for the new factory; Therefore, I would like to change my home and search for a new one in Dammam.
Another point I need to discuss with you is that I need a small house with two-bedroom, living room, and a kitchen. I will appreciate it if you can find this house near to the industrial area. In addition to that, I prefer it to be on the second floor.
The final thing I forget to tell you is that I am going to shift there on 15 August; if you can arrange it to be ready on august first, I will find the time to arrange myself and transfer my furniture.
I look forward to hearing from you. Should you require any further information, you will contact me; here it is my number: 557766774. Thanks in advance.
Faithfully yours,
Ahmed Karem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome and search for a new one in Dammam. Another point I need to discuss with you...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I prefer it to be on the second floor. The final thing I forget to tell you is ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... The final thing I forget to tell you is that I am going to shift there on 15 Au...
^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Thanks in advance. Faithfully yours, Ahmed Karem
^^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Faithfully yours, Ahmed Karem
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, therefore, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26966292135 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49898350753 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1793439613 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324428766341 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110429868711 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100012285521 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192344422004 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086859625323 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.