You are renting a new apartment, but your family situation has changed recently. Write a letter to the real estate agent asking them to find a new accommodation, more suitable for your needs.
In your letter explain – your current family situation. What type of new accommodation do you require?
When do you need to move?
Hi Robert,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, we are looking for new accommodation and need your assistance on the same which is apt for our needs.
Currently, my parents and I live in a single bedroom apartment which is sufficient enough but recently I got married, due to this, it became congested to accommodate the entire family in the small flat.
we are looking for a two-bedroom flat where my parents stay in a room and my wife along with me in another. Also, we are staying in the suburb where the amenities like hospitals, supermarkets, and education institutes are not in near proximity, hence we are looking in the within the city.
we need the flat to be available in the first week of next month since we have intimated our landlord that we will be vacating the house by the mid of next month.
Request you to share the details of the flat at the earliest
Your's Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...looking in the within the city. we need the flat to be available in the fi...
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Line 27, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of the flat at the earliest Yours Sincerely, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70303030303 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61516380488 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0725820322 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126033417919 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696494238415 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884107767242 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646622352237 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095345640011 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.