You are a secretary, planning a corporate event. Write a letter to entertainment company explaining what kind of party you would like it to be, indicate date and time of the event and your special requests.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regard to a corporate event that A company is holding on the 20th of September. We are planning to start at 10 am.
To begin with, your company organized our New Year party in 2018 and we were very impressed and pleased with your work. At this time the company is celebrating our manager's birthday. Therefore, I have a few special requests.
Firstly, as it is a birthday party there must be birthday decorations of an event avenue. Secondly, our employees expect to enjoy live music and have an efficient space for dances. I should say that music should be agreeable and audible. However, it should allow chatting without efforts. Finally, some of the guests do not eat red meat so please make allowance for this issue when you will work out the menu. I would appreciate it if you could send me your menu for this event two weeks before the party.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Annie Kim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 301, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...low chatting without efforts. Finally, some of the guests do not eat red meat so please ma...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon. Yours faithfully, Annie Kim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69101123596 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54600394617 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691011235955 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8668306858 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6428571429 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277940286652 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834299740932 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589974714628 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144592423952 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347353666517 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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