Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that volunteer work should become a required part of high school programs. I agree with this opinion because this development can be beneficial for youngsters in different ways.
To begin with, community service can give teenagers the opportunity to gain practical skills in different realms. Teaching younger children, for instance, allows trying educator's job. Such experience can be useful in a teenager's future career.
Secondly, working for a community enhances youngsters' social skills and physical health. Unfortunately, today many children spend their spare time watching TV or playing computer games. These activities can harm their fitness and lead to children's isolation. However, social work usually includes interaction with a huge amount of people and some physical activities. Therefore, it is a great way to keep young people sociable and healthy.
Finally, unpaid work can help adolescents to understand the process of earning a living and teach them to spend money wisely. Young people will appreciate other people's work after learning how hard and important it can be. Indeed, understanding, well-educated young people with some work experience is advantageous for society.
In conclusion, I support the idea of making unpaid social work a compulsory task for teenagers because it can give them useful work experience and improve youngster's lives and their self-esteem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teenager' or simply 'teenagers'?
Suggestion: a teenager; teenagers
... job. Such experience can be useful in a teenagers future career. Secondly, working for a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57943925234 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90754858312 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8309469491 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2857142857 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287965232813 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954143463541 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570696393831 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158990164719 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307828459922 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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