You are staying at your friend’s house who is traveling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend and say:
what happened and when
what was damaged in the house
what need to be done
Hello Jay,
I hope you’re staying safe there. It’s been a while I haven’t updated you about the things going on in here. Unfortunately, I’m just writing to inform you about the recent storm that hit the city.
Initially, I was really scared by hearing this out, and I called my parents to be here to support me. Although repetitive warnings were issued by the metrological department last Friday, the storm didn’t reach until midnight on Saturday.
But the time it reached the city, everything was already secured by the disaster management team. However, there is a small catch. Your front porch was damaged by the fast blowing wind and knock open the hole on the front door.
So, before calling up the service guy, I thought to check about the insurance which you took last year. Is it with, Reliance? If that is the case, I'll get it fixed by the time you will get home. Don’t need to worry much about it!
I'll take care of it, and let me know if anything else needed to be repaired.
With love,
Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...it with, Reliance? If that is the case, Ill get it fixed by the time you will get h...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
.... Don’t need to worry much about it! Ill take care of it, and let me know if any...
^^^
Line 11, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...if anything else needed to be repaired. With love, Apoorva
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33011256964 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710382513661 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8061843853 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7692307692 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12921042341 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362377177575 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341084292223 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630028823852 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026707063391 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.