Write a letter to your trainer to let him/her know that you cannot continue doing a sport activity with him/her. In your letter
Give details of the sport activity and your session times.
Explain why you are leaving
Tell the trainer what you liked about him/her
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform you about the discontinuation of the services that I enrolled in a couple of months ago.
I have been attending your sessions only on weekdays, Monday and Friday. Initially, I was in yoga training classes which run on weekends because of time constraint I was unable to join them. Now, however, I am an active participant in the swimming classes.
I really enjoy them, unfortunately I will not be able to continue these sessions as I am moving out to another city next month. After getting promotion recently in my company, they offered me a new position which requires me to relocate.
I am really grateful to have you as my trainer, and I recently know that you have awarded a stellar excellence award by Gym committee. One of the things I appreciate is your commitment to the work you offer all of us. I have asked my friends to subscribe to the youtube channel where you provided exclusive 30-day-fitness videos with holistic course material for free.
I hope you will consider my request and cancel my membership.
Yours sincerely,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...position which requires me to relocate. I am really grateful to have you as my t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85789473684 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88025564424 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.62639007 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9090909091 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193905513515 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700139030682 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432519196056 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882401988469 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494740688509 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.