You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
• State your reason for writing
• Describe the problems and explain how you feel
• Propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action.
Dear Mr. Sharma,
I am a student of Campbell English language school, and I along with my other friends are staying in your apartment number 253 building 2 for last 1 year. I had not faced any issue with it till last night.
However, yesterday, when I came back home, I found that geyser in my bathroom was not working. As it is month of extreme cold, I am finding it very difficult to manage without hot water in the bathroom. Also, there is some leakage from the tap of kitchen since last few days. Therefore, I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the problems that I am facing at your apartment.
After multiple requests for service, your workmen came and tried to fix the issues. Leakage from the tap is fixed; however, the bathroom geyser still does not work. Therefore, I had to call a plumber by myself to get it fixed but he mentioned that heating element of the geyser is irreparable and geyser needs to be replaced. Meanwhile, I am using gas stove to heat the water but it is quite time consuming.
I suggest you to kindly get a new geyser installed as current one is too old to be repaired.
I am looking forward to your cooperation.
Yours sincerely
Ruchi Verma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52511415525 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48941798282 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634703196347 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4638782593 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2307692308 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177091852561 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522473004737 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438435219151 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814866318902 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542212578464 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.