You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter,
state your reason for writing
describe the problems and explain how you feel
propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
Dear Sir,
I would like to talk about some unsolved issues regarding our tenant contract. I am staying your cottage in Leslie Gardens. It has taken quiet a long time that you promised to fix. However, even the workman 'Charlie' has done hard works, it was never going to change.
As you know, Toronto's winter is so cold and chill without proper heating unless other near the city. So I do not feel comfortable when I stay my household. Also, after I got back home from workplace, no one reject to have hot tub with hot water. But I have not had this pleasure moments for a while. The irritating situation has been occurred since the beginning of March.
I suggest that I may introduce you furnace experts who is friends with mine. Manipulating all housechores without proper instruments and butler is caused a number of cautious consequences in danger. Speaking of that, I can not endure if you do not take any action as soon as possible.
I hope I deliver correctly what I mean and I barely want to keep in touch with this situation.
Best wishes,
MJ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'tubbed'.
Suggestion: tubbed
...om workplace, no one reject to have hot tub with hot water. But I have not had this...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, i mean, speaking of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62631578947 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52513678629 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.736842105263 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6750693022 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.7857142857 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209471749918 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542846480123 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576885987 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963793850005 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622733322328 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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