You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, advertising is one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about. Because some ads are playing significant role to judge products when people decided to spend money. On the contrary, some others insist that advertising tend to consume things that ,even though we don not need things constantly. In this essay, I will address which argument I do agree with and suggest supportive resolution and examples.
To begin with,I agree with ad improves our lives by spending money about new products and commercial industry has been greatly changed ever since advert was introduced. According to CBC, many large enterprises strive to spend tons of financial budget to make creative ad for their clients. Many physiological resources have been shown that people set their own standard which trigger with among a growing number of advertisements. Last year, one of cosmetics field surveys illustrates that over 90 percent of clients were exposed the company's ad and its advertisement affect to decide what people want to buy. As we focus on marketing effect on corporates and guests. Clearly, most of advertisements based on supply and demand so that to make ads has cost effective compared with other method of marketing.
Another reason why I support the insist that many cases of Advert market succeed profits rather than other cost effective ways. As more companies tend to succeed on their market, the trend is booming their consume of structure as black and white. For instance, there were two companies ti combat with cell phone industry. However, A corporate failed to attract client's mind.
As a result, we are living in competitive environment surrounded by almost every parts which perhaps develop our quality of life and feeling. So we may well accept our present even if the advertisement is either unnecessary to use now or not.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...issues that people like debating about. Because some ads are playing significant role t...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... advertising tend to consume things that ,even though we don not need things const...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st supportive resolution and examples. To begin with,I agree with ad improves ...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...olution and examples. To begin with,I agree with ad improves our lives by spe...
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Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the advertisements') or simply say ''most advertisements''.
Suggestion: most of the advertisements; most advertisements
...fect on corporates and guests. Clearly, most of advertisements based on supply and demand so that to m...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eting. Another reason why I support the insist that many cases of Advert market succee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, for instance, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15131578947 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73271925038 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664473684211 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4054410668 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190541274247 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561873304493 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516851292488 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111536575576 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718037790678 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.