You are a student who wants to apply to the Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment.
Write a letter to the Principal of the College explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot. I am writing this scholarship program and other financial help programs available in college.
I want to apply for a Master’s degree at Green Pine College. Recently, I got graduated from Cambrian College, Toronto and now I want to pursue my master’s in order to get a degree which will later help me in achieving higher job opportunities.
Actually, I am experiencing some financial issues as I have not joined any job because I was very much into my studies and got scored top position in the college. Also, I was doing an English language course that could assist me in my higher studies in which I acquired the CLB9 level.
I am very keen on studying Master in Business Administration and I came across one of the students of the Green Pine College and she told me that there are certain credits for toppers in the college and I can even have scholarships. She guided me to write to you so that I can have in-depth knowledge of the financial assistance program.
I really want to study in this reputed college. Please let me about the financial programs run by the institute.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65841584158 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77116756434 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6336145688 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186928534799 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072177001943 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687610724959 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938005489105 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540933231496 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.