Due to television and the internet it is easier today for a large number of people to become famous.
Is this a positive or negative development?
The inventions in the field of technology have drastically impacted human life. Nowadays, owing to television and the internet getting popularity has become an effortless act. I in agreement with the notion and in my point of view, it is a negative development.
To begin with, earlier people use to work quite hard in order to grab attention from the people. Even, we have seen that most of the scientist’s work got famous after their death. The supporters of positive development say that this is decreased the count of such death rate. Now, people can easily upload and share their ideas on the internet and get easily get popular. Apart from this, television is like a shot in the arm as people can display their talent through the different reality programs conducted by big brands. For instance, the survey done by “The time” reveals that around 65 percent of people have thought that television and the internet platform has given the chance to explore them and gain popularity.
However, the black side of this internet and television is unseen. Firstly, to gain popularity some people usually defame others, and sometimes this criticism sometime ends up in the mental unitability of the person. Secondly, it has dramatically impacted the study of teenagers because they tend to spend more time on television and the internet for gaining ideas to become famous. They lose their focus in the study which results in lower grades. Thirdly, it has also impacted the health of the people because they use to watch television and the internet to relax instead of doing exercise which results in obesity. To illustrate, an application named TikTok has gained popularity among teens and around 95 percent of the teenager are influenced by this application.
To conclude, there might be some simple steps to get popularity through the internet or television, however, in my point of view some people use it for illicit purpose and teenager's results are drastically impacted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05792682927 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.656534195 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9480680513 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27267754668 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083837530744 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557937765793 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148211830451 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515208250515 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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