You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter:
explain the reason for the party
give the date and time of the party
suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Dear Keil,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to a surprise party which I have planned for Josh in order to subside his feelings of loneliness and homesickness.
When I was going through his personal details on Facebook, I came to know that his birthday is next week which disclosed the reason of his gloomy mood. Since he is feeling so down from a few days, I decided to throw a surprise party to uplift his mood.
As his birthday is on 14 June, I am planning to surprise him at night around 9 pm. According to his routine, by that time he will be coming back from his work and we will celebrate his birthday in his favorite restaurant “Indian Briyani”.
I want a favour from you; could you please bring some board games to my house because Josh loves to play them and after coming back from the restaurant we can play them. By the way, if you got your DSLR camera back from the repair shop, don’t hesitate to bring it with you as well.
See you at the party and please don’t be late this time.
Keep in touch,
Alex
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40306122449 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27646520639 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.953410092 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178534840197 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798652824366 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769367942094 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117809153689 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639033122865 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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