Dear Mac,
Hope you had a great day at school today. I know it has been a while since we spent time together, but I have not forgotten about the good times we spent whenever we had free periods. I am writing this letter to let you know that I'll be throwing a party for Charles this weekend.
The reason I am going to throw this party for Charles is because he has been feeling sad and homesick since he got back to school. When he came back this semester, he told me that he's missing everyone at home. He wished he could have spent more time with family.
Thus, The party will take place in the evening on the 4th of February 2023 which is on a Saturday. However, this will be a perfect timing, and everyone will be free after their various schedules during the day, so the party will be a full house.
Anyway, I suggest that you buy two bottles of vodka before you start coming to the venue. Also, I forgot to buy water, so I will appreciate it if you get four packs of bottled water. Finally, please get a pack of cigarette while coming because we have a few smokers in the house tonight, so it is expedient we make cigarettes available.
All the best.
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...ame back this semester, he told me that hes missing everyone at home. He wished he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, finally, however, if, so, thus, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29596412556 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16869814031 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7256232474 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140540456599 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539446867498 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556789883258 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784207559993 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377329255791 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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