You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr Haji,
I am writing to you about the possibility of taking a fortnight off work in order to complete my implant’s course. I am already aware about the patient’s complaints, whom I could not get around to finish their treatment before the course, but, although I planned carefully, my course has not finished yet, and I will require some more days to do so.
On return, I would endeavor to work more and harder in the clinic to catch up and finish any incomplete treatment I have left behind. I have already spoken to my nurse, Ms Taj, and made arrangements about our incoming work hours.
I realize my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to you and the clinic, but in the long term, we will benefit from my qualification. As you know, Dr Najafi stopped coming to the clinic a while ago, which made the dental team to refer any patient requiring implant to other institutes. By my new expertise, we will be able again at the clinic to meet the needs of such patients and fill up the gap between our clinic and others.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Aidin Farughi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.645 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72374282927 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7664177558 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179684693961 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759949911676 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443277132092 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102999719841 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227251161016 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.